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Tuesday, August 29, 2006

After all the work

Hello... *sigh*

Yeah... I finished my draft... haha... I'm so xian.

Submitted it to Mary (my tutor) today. Actually it was due yesterday but she's nice enough to let me submit a draft before submitting a final copy. Yeah... She returned my email after commenting & browsing through my work. Haha! Guess what she said?

"Gday Kane, I have read through your draft and made a fair few comments. I can see that you have been reading the material and you are right - it is controversial stuff. The ideas expressed in Walter's book are not those of the general scientific community.

Your critique is better that your summary although both could benefit from some editing. Many of your ideas are inadequately expressed, in some cases it is not clear what you mean.

Consider logical consistency in your summary, in some of your points you have expressed ideas which are mutually exclusive of one another. This is a difficult activity, if you would like to come in and talk to me about some of these theories tomorrow I would be happy to help you.

mmaaaryyyy"

Haha! Look look! My critique is better than (I assume that's a typo) my summary! Haha! And and... I am right! Woooo!!! Haha! "... you have been reading the material..." Y'know what? I only started on my critique this morning... after I woke up... which is like 11.30am. And I submitted my draft at 2pm. Haha! Walah! How cool is that? But I slept at 5 though... doing the stupid summary. Anyways, you have to admit GOD is great, ain't HE?

"... in God I trust; I will not be afraid. What can man do to me?"
-Psalms 56:11

Luckily this is the last critique I have to do le. The rest are practicals. I need to analyse the pests on one particular plant. I have yet to isolate that plant. And I need to dissect 3 insects. A herbivore, a predator, a sucker (like bee or butterfly kind of sucker). And ya! This Friday got quiz on Parasitology. *sigh* So much work to do... cannot even rest after my critiques... =P

I feel that even though this sem is so much more slack than last sem, the workload is so much more busy lor. Hai... I'd rather have the lectures during the week... Self-discipline somehow always evades me.

"For God did not give us a spirit of timidity, but a spirit of power, of love and of self-discipline."
-2 Timothy 1:7

"If you are not disciplined, then you are illegitimate children [of GOD] and not true sons."
-Hebrews 12:8

"[You] will die for lack of discipline, led astray by [your] own great folly."
-Proverbs 5:23

Haha! Silly Eunice... keep asking me to go her house to eat. Haha! Last time was the kangaroo steak. Now is porridge. Haha! It's ok... I appreciate your kindness. Sorry la, next time ok? Unless u all cannot finish & wanna throw away, then throw to me... haha!

Anyways, mmm... ok, my brain is kinda empty now... nothing to type le. Haha!

Oh ya! I was contemplating whether I should get a $199 bike with caliper brakes which can take normal usage, or a $429 bike with disc brakes and can take lots of drops & jumps. Most probably I'll get the $199 one la... but my options are still open... =) Waiting for Weiyang to contact me so we could get it together... I've got a free delivery coupon! Haha! Yay!

Ok, that's all. *grin*

Back to editing... *bleah*

The world isn't such a bad place... Even though evil lurks everywhere & sin covers the planet, love shines through. And love will prevail.

"Love never fails. But where there are prophecies, they will cease; where there are tongues, they will be stilled; where there is knowledge, it will pass away."
-1 Corinthians 13:8

Love me if you dare... 16:20
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